Comments on: Feature: WANTED: Ghost Writer for Aspiring Rapper

By: tommylee hayes

tommylee hayes — Sat, 10 Jul 2010 13:46:16 +0000

i see people sayin ,i think i can help …. people that’s the wrong attitude ,i’m a confident person n i believe in myself ,not big headed ,no i don,t have an ego ,i speak my mind that is why i write the lyrics ,the lyrics i have put on here are some of many i think of on a day to day basis if i,m not writing i am thinking constantly and it’s so natural ,i,m not a confident person at all normally ,but with this i am beyond confident ,thankyou and take care .

By: tommylee hayes

tommylee hayes — Sat, 10 Jul 2010 13:42:23 +0000

i write so many songs i think of lyrics when i don,t even have pen n paper ,i was born to do this ,it’s within my blood ,i didn,t learn it from anyone it’s imprinted in me ,some people are born to live…some are born to shine ,i believe i was born to make people make music ,i was born to bring fresh new ,great tunes into our world n everyday i write at least 3 songs ,normally hip hop ,but i do have what it takes to write rock and indie as i already have done ,thanks!

By: tommylee hayes

tommylee hayes — Sat, 10 Jul 2010 13:39:16 +0000

i write to spite the people who don,t think i,m too bright , despite the talent i hold close to my heart n soul ,these people r haters n trust me their in site ,i,m all for persuin ma dream goal , i don’t plan on livin the way i do for much longer , every day i can feel i’m gettin stronger ,don,t let me miss my chance ,there,s nothin wronger . i feel liked am all couped up inside ,n when it comes ,a aint gunna miss this ride ,at the momment time i bide n if you think i won’t make it ,then please step aside ,i will make it i won’t sink ,i will swim out from the power of a huge tide , can’t keep it together forever ,u can diss me whatever ,but i don,t believe in never never ,yeah …i,m gunna march through the stormy wheather .so please give me the chance to let the world see how someone can be ,so much better when they set their hidden talent free ,,,,adrennalin pumpin ,i can feel it now ,i,m on stage stompin ,i can feel it now ,n now i,m gunna show you ,show you how ,it,s done ,as my lyrics leave ma mouth faster than a bullet leaves a gun ,you gunna see that i really am 2nd to none owe off the chart my confidence has gone ,n i promice you this i,m gunna be someone ,on t.v ,your gunna see someone ,n hear someone who’s gunna shine ,but tick tock i,m waitin all the time ,these thoughts i have r puttin me forwards all the time ,you wanna know why ? this is puttin pen to paper n if you think you can beat me on stage then bring it ,i,m gunna lyricaly rape ya ,you can walk away with your head down n i will say see you later ,,,,now i see the crowd smilin as their pilin forwards towards me ,it’s all happenin ,n am rappin n it,s all very flatterin as the tank of the glass that holds me is shatterin ,you know it can’t hold me as ma words are batterin the glass i will pull through without gettin cut ,i managed to escape from bein held captive as i rapped it ,i couldn,t keep ma mouth shut! ,there’s nothin better than ,doin what i wanna do ,i don,t just do it to please me i do it to please you too! i,m gunna rap this i push out my words to you ,,poetry in motion is what a do ,there’s nothin better than me speakin out to you ,i’ve dreamed n daydreamed about this n now it’s all true ,thanks everyone i hope you just like what you heard ,i put 110% into every single word

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if you want my landline or mobile number please just ask me ,thanks!

By: tommylee hayes

tommylee hayes — Sat, 10 Jul 2010 13:37:10 +0000

head in a gutter tah tah talk with a stutter ,onlybread no butter ,don,t close down your shutters ,i need somewere to stay ,hayye all i did all day was beg when other people work get paid go home have there tea, get laid ,then watch some t v ,n if there lucky get some head why i,m here starvin ,ma stomachs in nots i,m feelin queezy ,yuo have life breezey i get all the storms ,rain hail thunder snow n ice , i,m in pain no wonder ,i don,t get much money coz passers by aint nice ,well fuckers that’s life i here ,let me step in your shoes n do the things you do for a day ,hayye you won,t because in my shoes your toes ull be hangin out ,you feel all the stones on the pavement underneathe um ,ahhr all my problems ll the hate i,m in a state n a need to let id out ,it,s dark now i,m alone ,pissin down rain ,how the hell am a supposed to stay sain ,you couln’t blame me if i went insane ,these feelings i have i need to hold inside, these feelings can’t be tamed n that’s no lie ,,, cold nights again ,no shelter i don,t ask why coz no one answers ,why is ma life this way i need some answers ,wish i was a rich guy who could but whatever he fancies ,i,de be straight to a resteraunt orderin the menu ,call girls you ,n you then you ,n if there was someone i could lend to ,i wouldn,t coz it be my money ,i owned it quit your shit id aint funny ,shoes on the other foot so i,ll strut ,about with ma chin up who cares about the guy on the street i got everything i need n i don,t worry about food to eat ,he can bare the cold in the winter n he can splinter from the burnin sun in the summer ,yeah fuck the slummer he aint got shit coz he’s dummer than the average guy n i aint gunna even ask why ,leave him there let him look up to the sky talkin to his self like a simpl guy ,life fuckit shit happens ,put yourself in the shoes of a slummer mother fucker ,then you won,t be so confused on the reasons why i drink so much booze from another bum on the streets as we both lose the battle of wills to live another day ,we all pull together n say , hayye,we were born to say how it goes so what if all the rich folk knows ,fuck um and there bitch howes coz as far as they know ,were just the people who have no place to go……………….
these are lyrics from a song i reciently wrote ,its a passion of mine to write such lyrics ,i have wrote 145 songs so far ,i need to find work ,to write the lyrics for famous rappers in the hip hop industry ,i know i’m capable and if you want to see more of my lyrics -my songs please feel free to ask me or if you have any contac numbers ,emails ,names etc please let me know ,thankyou!

By: Daniel

Daniel — Fri, 25 Jun 2010 12:34:10 +0000

i could maybe help but i don’t know if you could do my stuff its a bit, lets just say different email me if you want to check it out tho

By: hurryupnbuy

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By: Joseph

Joseph — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 08:00:43 +0000

I can definately write good lyrics for you. Contact me to get it started

By: estrellita sanchez

estrellita sanchez — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 01:28:58 +0000

i think i can help e-mail me writte who you are in the subject seccion so i know i can trust the e-mail. i hope i hear from you soon.

By: Mark

Mark — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 01:10:59 +0000

i think i can help out. Contact me with some details